Monday, April 11, 2011

rad i3tibar part 45 final

hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii guys and yes its the end of the story. this post to all my commenter s  

3wash’s P.O.V.
 
I could hear 3bood talking, well actually screaming, with 5aled, shamma, and shamsa.
 
3bood: it’s been two weeks. She didn’t leave the room at all. 
 
Shamsa: she did a little yesterday.
 
Shamma: 3bood, 5aled go talk to him. At least ti6la3 min il mkan tshoof il 3alam. Ma y9eer 7absa 3mrha da5el.
 
5alood: I have no problem with that.
 
3bood: ill book the flight for tomorrow.
 
Shamsa’s P.O.V.
 
5aled walked shamma and 3bood to the door. I thought he left with them. So automatically my tears started running down my face.
 
5aled: shamsa!!
 
I quickly wiped my tears away.
 
Shamsa: I thought you left with them.
 
He sat down beside me.
 
5aled: why are you crying?
 
Shamsa: I (sniff) I don’t like seeing her this way.
 
He hugged me. It was comforting but a little too awkward.
 
5aled: 3bood and I will fix it.
 
3bood’s P.O.V.
 
(2 days later)
 
3bood: she misses you terribly. You’re the onl one that she needs right now.
 
Na9oor: ya3ney shoo tbany asawee. I go to her and start talkinglike nothing happened, that I didn’t leave her, didn’t hurt her.
 
5alood: na9oor she loves you. At it shows that you want her back but as more than just your girl friend.
 
I along with na9oor stared at him. This guy has a plan and im not letting na9oor give up 3wash even if he tries every possible way.
 
Na9oor’s P.O.V.
 
This is it I can’t back out, not after we talked to her parents.
 
Iffff yallah 3bood 9arly sa3a im waiting for his phone call.

(Phone ringing)
 
Na9oor: aloo!!!
 
3bood: calm down man.
 
Na9oor: tgooly calm down. You said you would call in 10 minutes it’s been an hour. Akeed a39abee batroo7 w batnarfaz. Anyways what did they say?
 
3bood: wage8aw. 3my ygool you can tell her you’re self, and your flight is at midnight.
 
I was speechless min kither ma ana mistanis
 
3wash’s P.O.V.
 
Shamsa: look I put the dress on your bed. Finish your bath, put it on. Do your hair and make up.then go to the restaurant I told you about. Give the guy my namehe’ll show you to the table I reserved. Okay?
 
Me: okay.
 
Shamsa: I owm you big time. I have to get my dress from the dry cleaners so I won’t be long.
 
She left. I got out of the bathromm. After I finished my hair and make up, i put the black dress on. To be honest it was very elegent. Something you would wear to a date.
Anywasy, I put my heals on, locked the door, and then walked down the stairs.
 
 
(In the restaurant)
 
They led me to a table on the balcony. It was beyond beautiful. Candles, flowers and the moon light. It all fit together, it was perfect.
 
(Half an hour later)
 
I took out my bb to check where the hell shamsa is, when suddenly………………
 
A hand appears infront of my face, holding a rose. I reached for it nknowing that there is only one persin that will do all this for me. When my hand touched his, I turned around. My eyes started to tear up at the sight of na9oor staning there. He placed his other hand on the back of my chair, leaned in, and placed his lips on mine. More tears left my eyes as I pulled him closer. He pulled his lips away from mine, but his face was right there in complete contact with mine.
 
Na9oor: (whispering) im sorry.
 
Me: I missed you
 
Na9oor: and I’m an idiot for letting you go.
 
After that he sat down facing me oon the other chair. We talked; well he did, about what happened. We ordered, ate, and then talk some more. Out of no where na9oor stood up and walked to me. So I stood up too. His face had a serious look on it which scared me. He held my and looked me straight in the eye. The he kneeled down.  
 
Na9oor: 3wash, I love you too much and I can’t handle being away even for second. Your answer is what matters the most. Will you marry me? 
 
I kept staring at him. Tears flowing down my cheeks. Happy tears. I tried, but nothing came out of my mouth, so I just nodded. He slid the rind in my finger, stood up and hugged me.
 
Me: I love you………
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Na9oor moved to NYU to be with 3wash. As a lot of you know he loves her too much to stay away. 2 years after he proposed they got married.
 
What are you waiting for? The future waits.
 
(2 years later)
 
3bood has a one year old son (m7amad) and now shamma is 3 month pregnant.
 
Asma, 5aloof’s wife gave birth to a beautifulgirl (maha) 2 days ago, but before that thay had a small get together party.
 
7amad and 7amdan got married; their weddings were 4 days apart. The 2 couples left for their honeymoon together.
 
Rashood found a special some one (heyam) they’re getting married in a week’s time.
 
Fa6oom got her self an admirer. She told him she’s not interested, but he won’t stop trying. So they settled to be friends.
 
Sara….. Well, after her parents found about what she did in school and in uni, she was forced to marry her cousin and return to the U.A.E.
 
5aled and shamsa are dating, but both are very serious about it.
 
3wash is happy to have a brother (3zooz) which is 3 years old. Even her mother adores him.she comes to visit regularly and got to be a good friend of mariam. As you can see 3wash’s parents got separated because of life’s conditions.
 
Na9oor and 3wash are………… I can’t even find a word to describe them. He cares and loves her more than anything. She is more than happy to have found some one like him. Although both of the wanted so me more alon time together, but they are also greatful that they would be able to start their own little family.

8 comments:

Naduuuuh said...

OMG WALA GOOSEBUMPS!!! ITS ALL DONE T~T I'LL DIE HAPPY :P THANX!!! <3 LOVE YOU!!

Maniacs In Love said...

AMAAAAAAAAZING ENDING!!!! I LOVED IT WALLAH!! -silent reader-

hopefully you'll start a new story?
please check my new blog:
http://maniacsinlove.blogspot.com/

ASM said...

han00shi: yeah finally you can die hehehehehe i love you too

maniacs: i will check your bloge thank you ive been looking for something to read w im glad you your silence has been broken i would have loved to hear more comments from you. and about a new story well im heading that way

glittery-butterfliez said...

wain my comment? :O

hufff...

ma 3alaih ill recomment :p


awalan sorry for my late laattee comment...i was out all day (a) :p


thaniyan: AAAAAAAAAAHHHHH
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

FINALLY THE FINALE!

*dancing my happy dance*


This was a very peaceful ending!

ma nisaitay wla wa7id min ur characters mashallah 3alaich :D


very simple and very satisfying!

enjoyed reading it and can't wait for ur new story :*

ASM said...

inshallah soooooooon w thank you it was my pleasure to give you guys such a thing

caramela said...

Sorry ta'akhrt bil comment ;*
i really loved the story o i loved ur writing mashllah t3ayshena ildor ;D
Thanx for this amazing story ;**
i cant wait for ur next story ;D

ASM said...

Walaw 7abebty

Red said...

Abeeeee a poosttt :(