things are going a bit fast cause im not getting any feedback on the story at all now a days and i want to end it as soon as possible for a new story hopefully more interesting. and please wallah im losing it in me aba ashoof more comments
bader: 9a7 i was soo overwhelmed nesait as2lich kam 9arlich?
nouf: the doctor egool 7 weeks
bader: w ma 7asaity?
nouf: no not really it was really normal until last week
bader: both of you are healthy right
nouf: yes 7ababey now would you please concentrate on your studies you have a final tomorrow
bader: i cant
salem: kenzi whats wrong?
kenzi: get out
salem: im not stop acting this way and come back to your senses. and can you put your clothes back on so we can talk
kenzi: i don't want to talk I THOUGHT THAT THIS IS WHAT YOU WANT?
salem: i never asked for this.
kenzi: I HEARD THE GUYS TALKING, THEY SAID ALL YOU WANTED TO DO IS GET IN MY PANTS SOMETHING HE COULDN'T
salem: kenzi listen to me.
kenzi: no i said no
i got my self closer pinning her to the wall behind her. i didn't want to scare her but that was the only way to shut her up.
salem: i love you kenzi. let them talk i just want you to know i never thought of this. im leaving now illl let you calm down and time to think
i kissed her forehead leaving.
1 comment:
Don't rush the story because you're not getting feedback.. Continue the story like you have a huge crowd reading it and giving you feedback. That way when the story is done and in a years time someone that stumbles on your blog will read it and enjoy the story. Keep in mind that as long as the number of visits is increasing then for sure someone is reading your story. Don't ruin it by speeding up el a7dath keep it steady just like how you used to ;)
Waiting for the next post x
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