Tuesday, July 17, 2012

im 3 years younger (58) final post

nouf: mum??
mum: ashoof
nouf: mum he's alive and if he send this that means he's always checked up on us.
mum: no
nouf: mum...
mum: no it cant be... laish??
bader: 3amoo calm down... he's still alive and he obviously still cares...
mum: he doesnt if he did he would be here with us not hiding..
i couldnt move from the bed not with ahmad in my arms. i saw my mum breakdown in tears. bader helped her sit and gave her some water to drink. he sat beside her and wrapped his arm around her.
i text 7anan telling her about everything that happened and if she could pick my mum up since their flight isn't till this upcoming weekend.

bader: so what are you going to do about it?
nouf: i...
*ahmad cries*
nouf: can you hand him to me i think e's hungry.
bader: samy bira7man awal.
nouf: you're gonna be an awesome dad so stop freaking out.
bader: you really think so?
nouf: i guess after i teach you how to change his diapers.
bader: laaa w enty laish omah.
nouf: to feed and dress him w adl3a ba3ad shoo
bader: mashay dala3 hatha 5al ykbar im sending him to military school.
i smacked his hand. he took ahmad and placing him in the crib.
nouf: im not letting you near my baby again.
bader: *sitting on the bed* 3ady i just want my babe.
nouf: 3aib
bader: *giving me this "-.-'" look* i was gonna kiss you and he's asleep
nouf: still we arent alone.
bader: babe min al7een w ray7 we will never be alone so you better learn how to sneak around with me.
nouf: one kiss.
he just pulled himself closer and placed his lips on  mine kissing me very gently and lovingly.
bader: nouf tadreen a7bich 9a7?
nouf: i love you too.

after that we both fell asleep with him sitting by the bed holding my hands

next day

mum: your aunts and your uncles wives are coming today w om 5aled too, w i think saif's mum and his sister. w at night your uncles w 5aled, saloom, and 3zooz are coming by
nouf: mama are you okay?
mum: why wouldnt i?
nouf: you know about dad.
mum: can we talk about this some other time please.
nouf: okay.


5aled: where's the little monster.
nouf: dont say that about my boy
3zooz: goom 5al ashoof
saloom: the boy has mine and bader's green eyes i have to right to see him and carry him first *ahmad starts to cry*
bader smacks their heads as he slowly carries him and rocks him gently till he's quite.
bader: anyone wants to hold him?
saloom: ana hathail alan y5afoon
nouf: bader hen's your dad coming he's the only one that hasn't
bader: he's coming in an hour got caught up in work.

one day later in nouf's house.

mum: nouf bader's here he's coming upstairs (over the phone)
nouf:okay

bader: baby i miss you soo much
nouf: i did too come lie down facing me
bader: ahmad....ahmad.....look he's looking at me
nouf: you called him didn't you
bader: oh so the little guy knows his name
nouf: give him your finger he'll grab onto it.
*nouf's phone rings*
nouf: ummm okay ill be down now.... it's my mum she wants me shway if he cried get him to me because i haven't fed him yet.
bader: okay

nouf: mum... mum wain... oh you're here..... sitting with a man....mama who is he.
man: you grew up to be a beautiful lady just like your mum
tears were forming in his eye no it cant be he cant be my ...
mum: nouf come sit down we have to talk to you
nouf: no who is he
mum: he's your dad.
i just stared at him i wanted to be in his arms i wanted him to cover up for all the lost time but i was angry why now.
dad: i had cancer that's why i left. i knew your mum cant handle it if i died so i left.
nouf: yeah because that made a big difference.
dad: i went to the states there i found out that it spread even more i got chemo therapy it helped for a while but then it came back. i had to get a liver, kidney and one lung transplant in the last year but i stayed for three more months for extra check up they told me im good to go.
nouf: why did you come back?
dad: 3amich 3abdallah told me you got engaged so i wanted to check then i found out that your mum never signed the divorce papers. nouf im sorry dont forgive me now but give me a chance to make things right.
i stood up and walked to him. i stood exactly in front of him then i crouched down placed my head in his lap and cried. he got down to the floor and hugged me really tight.
nouf: dont leave again, please.

bader: nouf ahmad is cryy.... 3mo
mum: yeah.
dad: is that him?
nouf: bader come i want you to meet my dad.... this is bader and our baby ahmad.


my dad got to have a long talk with bader all the while holding ahmad in his arms. 7anan and saif did show up with 9ager. well my dad was shocked about that but very happy he knew saif's dad along time ago perfect family is it.......


4 years later.

nouf: baaaaaaaaaderrrrrrrrr
bader: shooo tbain enty w 3yalich kila 7ashra
nouf: get your ass of the bed how could you do this to me in 4 year im pregnant again 7aram 3alaik.
bader: wait im gonna have another baby
nouf: aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
ahmad: baba mama laish t9ee7
bader: mama bteeb baby ydeed
ahmad started to cry
bader: ya he 7ala laish t9ee7
ahmad: ma aba
bader: inzain 5ala9 noora ragdah
ahmad: okay bas aba new psp
bader: inshallah 7abeby
nouf: just get up and get dressed im dealing with you later my mum will be mad if we miss this dinner.

back at her parents house

dad: hala ib ahmad hala bil '3aly
ahmad: i love you yadee
mum: 36eeny noora w roo7y g3dy 3ndhom e5tich titrayach da5l...

after long chats and many laughs bader decided to announce
bader: 3ndy lkom 5bar (all was listening to him) nouf's pregnant
shocked and happy faces stared at me
mum: mita batl7geen enty lain al7een ma 5ala9ty drasa
nouf: 5ala9 ba3dain.
5aled: inzain ana 3ndy shay anba agool ba3ad.... im engaged
nouf: mabrook ma b'3ait
bader: tstahal bagee hal bgar il thnain 3an i3ansoon 3alaina bas.
mum: yalla goomo il akl zhab

we all sat down to eat together talking passing the food around and just enjoying our time. i never realized ill have a complete family but now i cant ask for more



thank you all for reading my story i hope you enjoyed it as much as i did and for those who didnt i will try next time ill be posting soon inshallah with a new story and i hope you guys will enjoy it too. i would love to hear from every reader. P.s. you guys can comment even with out an account

5 comments:

Unknown said...

can't believe its over :')) u do have a new story don't u? I KNEW SHE WAS MEETING HER DAD IN THE LAST POST oooh yah B))

caramela said...

I really loved the ending o i really love how u right o kilshai ;D

choco-rain said...

loved it! Can't wait for the new story

Anonymous said...

Simpley .....LOVE IT xoxo

Anonymous said...

Best story ive ever read i think u should have more faith in ur self i didnt i stayed awale till 8 in the morning just to finish this amazing blog